conpaxist
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All my life, I always wanted to be somebody. Now I see that I should have been more specific.[on:Con
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Post by conpaxist on Sept 24, 2007 23:06:04 GMT -5
How should i improve this game?
If you want to you could join my project
I am also dreaming of an massive project like night 99:
The Heartstone On Mistmantle, an enchanted island safe from the outside world is a peaceful kingdom until... An evil plot is in action. The mists protecting the island from the outside word are weakening. A ship arrives caring news of the outside world days before the new king`s coronation. They say their kingdom is under siege. They request for a support.
Shortly after its the ship`s arrival, the Heartstone: a stone that repels its self from anyone but the true king/queen is missing. The coronation is postponed for the Heart Stone is crucial to it.
An army of men are sent in secret to capture Mistmantle.
Some betray their king. Some will stay loyal.
An erie past is unveiled. A being so evil, that he laughts at evil, who was thought to be dead might not be dead.
Main protagonist
Name: Urchin of the Riding Stars Age: Early teens Race: Squirrel
Doesn't know his parents (at the beginning of the game) was adopted. Later he discovers that his dad was a priest and his mother was a rare honey-coloured squirrel. Was prophesied at birth. "He will bring down a powerful ruler". Not born in Mistmantle. Born on a of night of Riding stars.(A event that takes place when something very good or very bad is gong to happen)
Note: Most people in the game are animals.
name and characters are from Urchin and the riding stars
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BTKGF
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Post by BTKGF on Sept 25, 2007 2:29:12 GMT -5
I would suggest if the mist surrounds the Island and protect it that the king asks for the troops to train his people as he believes the mist is weakening (of course only his story) Just makes it more plausible.
Also there is always the whole the king is going to cleanse the outside world of evil and corruption which will split the people so you will have to be careful who you trust as are they supporters of this action or not. (again probably just a story on the behalf of the king and he really just wants power).
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conpaxist
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All my life, I always wanted to be somebody. Now I see that I should have been more specific.[on:Con
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Post by conpaxist on Sept 25, 2007 2:41:57 GMT -5
Thanks, btkgf
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